How are you planning to focus your article? Remember the Boston Globe travel article focused on one element of Boston's tourism (the harbor history boat) What are you planning to focus on?
Write 5-7 sentences being as specific as possible. This is going to be the proposal to the editor (me) for your article. If I don't think that it is focused enough, you are not going to get "hired" and will have to resubmit your proposal, so make sure you are clear on your intentions and specific in your proposal.
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I'am planning on focusing on the structure of the city like the way its made and the way every thing is new age stuff
i will focus my article on the constitution center. this center shows how history in America was made. the constitution center shows everything from slavery to womans rights to even the 3 branches. i will focus on this the most because i am most interested in the history of the U.S.
In my article i am going to focus on all the things that make Philadelphia a special place.First by telling how old the city is,so the more older the city is,the more history that happen.Then by going into how big it is,the great views of bridges and water that you can see.Then telling about all the historical landmarks there,buildings,and museum's were you can go that tells you a lot of information about what it means to be an American.
ChRiS McKoY 8E
I am planning to focus on my article by using my topic. Also by staying on topic only. I am going to try to organize my article and place my paragraphs in the right place where it makes since. For my audience in my article I want it to be everyone because my article will be education, and about the pass in Philly. My texture of my article will mostly be description and direct quotes. These two are good for travel articles.
Since my travel article is being written by an author from the future year 2093, I will be interviewing "centenarians", (students from my class" on specific topics ad attractions. My main focus is to educate Philadelphia's clueless citizens. My article is inspired by the movie idiocracy where in the future every on is dumb. I will show the people of 2093 what it was like to live in the year 2008.
I will focus my article on the constitution center. This center shows how history in America was made. The constitution center shows everything from slavery to woman’s rights to even the 3 branches. I will focus on this the most because I am most interested in the history of the U.S.
What I am going to focus on in my travel article of the future is. I want to focus on all my tourist attractions because if they see that I have a lot f tourist attractions and they are good ones then tourists will come to my city, and that will give me a good population. I am going to talk about my attractions, the operating hours, cost, whats in the attraction, and the best part of the attraction I am going to make sure that i make my city seem as fun as possible so i can get a good population going in my city, but i want to make sure that the tourist who come don't trash my city up because then I'm not going to have a good environment then people will start moving out of my city then population will decrease an I don't want that at all. I want to also mention historic places in my city i know those are considered tourist attractions but I want to talk a little more about those then the fun attractions because those things mean a lot to my city an I don't want tourist just walking by them because they're not fun I know I said I want my city to be as fun as possible but I do have some serious things in my city and thats why I like my city its not based on one theme it is mixed up a little bit in every place.
In my article it will be focused on the most interesting facts from the past. So basically anything in the past that was the most outstanding will then be put into my article with some great facts about it.So when I find one interesting fact I will write at least one paragraph about that place and why you should visit it.Then toward the end explain in at least two paragraphs why all of these places are good places to visit.
The plan for my article is to attract tourist. To catch the attention of readers. My focus is on future time. I want people to know about the future and what it holds for the people of the world(not saying that i actually know). I plan on doing research and finding things that i think will go along with my article topic. Quotes from people that i plan on interviewing and asking them: "What do you think the future has in store for us people?" That's pretty much it.
I am going to focus on the some famous monuments, buildings and artifacts around Philadelphia. To be more specific, I will focus on Independence Hall and the constitution. I chose to focus on these because I think that they are the most important things in Philadelphia.
for my future city expedition am going to focus on the tourist. And have many people live in our town. We have money for me to do that first. I must create a place for my towns residence and i have to see how we can improve our economic growth and build a commercial zone and don't waste a lot of money. For the feature artical am going to focus on the tourist because if my town has a lot people visiting there we are going to make more money
How I am planning to focus on my article is by making sure I have all my information and materials I need to complete the article. I have to make sure I have looked at the gathered up in as well as making sure I didn't mistake to say things twice or use the same information over and over again. I have to make sure I have all the places I written are spelled correctly and make sure I have them spelled right. My whole intention is to make everything specific make it seem like the reader is really there and make sure they understand clearly. My intentions are also to make sure that the reader is captured in the book.
I am planing to focus my article in to attracting people of all ages. I need to focus on the past so i need to use places that have been very old in Philly. I am planing to focus on the Independence Hall. I am going to do this because there is so much people could learn in there. It also has so much past like the signers of the Constitution were there and signed the Constitution. I could travel back in time and be there when they signed the Constitution and even before the Constitution was made.
I am planning to focus on my article by using my topic. My topic is the pass. Also I am going to stay on topic by ONLY talking about the pass. I don't want to be talking about the future.
CHRIS MCKOY 8E
I'm going to focus my article on the Present in Philadelphia.My article will be focusing going on a field trip to philadelphia on 2015 and describe how would philly look like?
In my article it will be focused on the mostly new stuff from the future. So basically anything in the future that is most outstanding will then be put into my article with some great facts about it.So when I find one interesting fact I will write at least one paragraph about that place and why you should visit it.Then toward the end explain in at least two paragraphs why all of these places are good places to visit.
For my future city expedition am going to focus on the tourist. Try to have many people live in our town. We have money for me to do that first. I must create a place for my towns residence. I have to see how we can improve our economic growth and build a commercial zone and don't waste a lot of money. For the feature artical am going to focus on the tourist. Because if my town has a lot people visiting there we will make more money
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Since the constitution isn't really in Philadelphia, I have to focus on Independence hall. The constitution was signed there in Independence Hall. I will write about the constitution instead. Since my article is about the future of Philadelphia, I will explain that the building is starting to get weathered after all these years and how people are treating it.
Since my article is based on the past of Philadelphia, i would be focusing on the historical places that happened during the past. How would i do that?. By finding out more information that happened in Philadelphia, How old was the buildings back then, How was it structured.Another way is by finding out how the population was back then, and if it did increase till now?.
Other information would be the interesting facts,which will catch the readers attention.
When writing my article I'm planning on focusing on many things. Since my job is to write and article about New York in the past. I would mainly focus on big events that happened in specific areas, and then compare it to how it is now these days. I will also write about many landmarks that are now in New York and write about how did the events occur to make the landmark. I would also research more information to find out interesting facts to get my reader's attention. If I only write about landmarks and stuff my reader's might get bored so I want to make my article interesting by adding facts abut maybe the malls or town fairs that were stated in the past and etc.
I am writing about the present and I am planing to attract people that want to go on a vacation so I will like them to come to Philadelphia. The other thing I am planing to do is to talk about interesting thing about what I saw when I went to Philly and to tell people what kind of things they will see if they go to those places. In one of my paragraph I will like to talk about my experiences when I went to Philadelphia and how much I enjoy my time there. The other Important thing I will like to add to my article is to make it interesting that people will like to read it and to have a catchy title.
There are many ways i am planning to focus on my my article. One way is by looking up information in the internet, news paper, and books with information about my topic. Another way to focus on my topic is by giving great detail to the article. Giving great detail is meaning to catch the readers attention and never loose sight of it. I would like to teach the reader some new things that he/she never knew.
In my article i will be focusing on how the future will look like and stuff like that.I also will be focusing on stuff like maybe what it had look like in the past and try to refocus on those things to make it run on higher power then what it happened in the city
I want to focus my article on the future technology of my future city project. The technology will reach new levels and make life more complex and less stressing and complicated. Aqua Tech, Africa will be amazing and beautiful. Tourists attractions include, the zoo/ wildlife exhibit, the downtown shopping area, and the beautiful beach. The zoo && wildlife exhibit is basically a caged forest showing the heavenly virtue of animals caring for other animals and the site of the beautiful canopy of the forest tree's. The downtown shopping area show how we use future technology and we use water to power everything. We have an water windmill type of idea to conduct electricity to stop the air pollution and hazardous chemicals. The beach's beautiful sunset lights up the city and puts the icing on the cake for this beautiful city of Aqua Tech. IT gives you a feeling of falling in love and it is the prefect example of where we get our water. The purpose of my article is within its name Aqua - Tech. Aqua for water and Tech for technology that runs off of water.
The way i am planing to focus my article is by making sure that i make it clear as possible. Make sure that i stay on the topic "The Future". My main focus is to show everybody that sees my article to know it is the future. Also to show that "Spin City" is the ONLY future city. Last to make the best and nothing but the best future city.
In my future article I’m planning on focusing on how big my city is and what it look like. Also how many people live in my city? Next all the nice things that is in my city like for example schools, police stations, and etc. What is the cost of some of these things?
These are some of my plans for my article.
I'm planning on focusing on the details that I'm going to put in my article. I want to put a lot of information in my article . in my article I would want to have some pictures of the past for my article . For my details i want a lot of them to explain whats going on.
Dear Editor,
I am planning on writing an article about the city I live in. Which is Meunta. Meunta is a very nice place for visitor to go. It is a place for people who are 18-25 and they looking to have some fun and enjoy the nightlife. I also plan to put picture of Meunta .
In my article I would like to say that I will catch my audience attention. Not only will a talk about serious matter but also try to have fun moments. I will focus on important subjects about my future city project i will more focus on the zoo the the sliding sidewalk and etc. Those are things i will focus.
In my article there are many ways i am going to keep the reader focus. A way of keeping the reader attention is drawing the reader into my story. I can draw the reader in by putting starting with questions and making them think. Questioning is a way to catch the reader's attention because they'll want to no more. I will show the reader so visual work too meaning pics.
I am planning to focus on my article by starting on my city and looking up different websites.How i plan to real my readers in is by explaining and putting a lot of detail into my article talking about the fun things, historic things and ect. What I plan to focus on is things that kids may want to see or go to and where parents may want to relax spend time with their kids or each other and see prehistoric landmarks
I'm planning to focus on the history of Philly. I'm also planning to focus on the sites and everything.
Philadelphia is a state that has a lot of history behind it. There many historic sights. Just yesterday they cracked the liberty bell and it's now on display. You can see the original Betsey Ross flag. Take a tour of where she did it and how she got the idea. Take a walk through the museum. Take a carrige ride through the misty night and smell the fresh air of Philly.
Geralda 8f
I am talking about the present so The way plan on keeping my reader focus is by making sure I stay on topic, giving specific details on every place I plain on talking about in New York for example I plan on talking about time square and so that means that if i plan on talking about then I am going to tell the reader to reader where to shop where to visit and so on. another way to keep my reader focus is by not making them board making sure my reader is Interested at all times. One place I would tell my reader who are between the ages of 15-23 to visit the Apple store and much more.
My article would be focusing o the past of New York. There would be so much history to talk about you'll be amazed. I will talk from the racist day to the refugee. I would be focus mostly in this topic because i love to learn and know new history. Also during my article i am going to introduce new things and more.
For my article for my future city I plan on focusing on like different resturants and tourist sites. Also I will give historical information on these different places but not a lot to make it seem like a history article, but i will also give some examples of exotic animals (some only found in my future city, Spin City) and also some animals on display in musems that became extinct before that time.
In my article i will be focusing on how the future will look like and stuff like that.I also will be focusing on stuff like maybe what it had look like in the past and try to refocus on those things.To make it run on higher power then what it happened in the city.Also I would also want people to visit our stuff we have a big movie theater and if you want to relax.In the movie theater we are going to have a spa so you can relax.
I plan on showing them the places there is to go to,like the mall in down town . In the mall there is like 90 stores that you can get what you want. There is a lot of place to eat . You can get food from all over the world . So if you like food from the world you should come to the mall.In the night could go to the club's to just hang out and have a drink .
In my future article I’m planning on focusing on telling my audience that we have a movie theater that has a spa in it. So when you are under stress you can go to the spa and get a good massage. Also while you are getting a massage you can watch one of the movies that are out in theaters. Also we are going to have a beach that you can bring your kids to. If you are on vacation these are good place to visit.
I'm planning to focus on the past where I'm going to give some information about the things going on here in the past like when the constitution was made in 1776. And you will see the different lifestyles that was going on in the past.
I'm planning to focus on the present of Philadelphia aka [Philly].
I'm also planning on telling my readers [young adults and up] about Philly and what is Philly all about.
Philadelphia is a city of Pennsylvania. So many little things have happened in Philly. And if you want to know more about history back then you should go to the a museum. Take a bus tour around and see the stairs of Rocky Balboa && so much more history. They is so much that happened so take some time off && see whats its all about.
In my article i will be focusing on how the future will look like and we will have areas like hotels were people can stay at when they are visiting.The hotels are ran by technology and we have televisions have touch screens.I also will.To make it run on higher power then what it happened in the city.Also I would also want people to visit our tourist sites we have a big movie theater and if you want to relax.In the movie theater we are going to have a spa so you can relax.We are also going to have big malls for our tourists to shop at. In the malls we are going to have big wide screen televisions.
The reason that you want to come to "Spin City" is because we have the greatest weather. Also Spin City has the best hotels. The beaches have life guards ready to make sure you are safe. There are police that drive up and down the streets every hour. Spin City is just like Miami but better because we have more actives to do. We have the largest beach in the world.
For my article I will focus on the main eye catchers in Philly. Like some of the historical building, sights and the different fountains that you can see. More specifically on the historical sights like the Liberty Bell and some of the museums focusing on some of Philly’s history plan on doing this because for most part I am trying to catch the readers attention by introducing some interesting things about Philly. This will hopefully attract some attention bringing in more people.
I plan to make my article interesting by writing about places in Philadelphia. Places like the mall; King Of Purrsia, Market St., where there are a lot of shops, and stores you could to for you to spend your money. I would say that street is where you could go eat at a cafe such as starbusk and the art supplies store, the sneaker store etc...
I want to also talk a little about the Constitution place we went to because It's a part of past and guide us through the presents everyday.
Iam writing about the futureoif my future I planning onto focus on the buildings and the mini olympic complex and the restrurants.
The mini olympics complex is a area of my city and it is full of courts and feild and every month there is special leagues that allows all range of ages to participate for a affordable price. we have buildings for army and navy in 1 setion of my city.
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